Junior Room Articles
At the Waimate 50 by Jaxson
It was loud. It was fast. What was it? It was CARS! There were heaps of them! It was so loud it nearly made my ears sore. They went very fast.
There were little cars and big cars. Some of them crashed and went BANG into the walls. Some went out of control and I got frightened.
It was a very noisy day. There were lots and lots of people at the Waimate 50.
Jaxson has been learning how to use a hook to make the reader want to read his story. He has also used a question to make the reader think about something. Jaxson is using descriptive words to make the reader really understand what it was like to be there at the Waimate 50. Well done Jaxson – You are a writing superstar!
