Junior Room Articles
Mary the Lamb comes to School by Eliza
Mary the Lamb comes to School
When I touch Mary she feels as soft as silk.
She is as white as snow. Mary has a little black nose and blackish eyes. She has big eyes she is is beautiful.
The Little Chicks come to School
The chicks look like spotty little penguins.
The chicks feel fluffy and soft.
The chicks sound like little alarm clocks.
Teacher’s note: Eliza is thinking carefully before she writes to make sure that she uses precise adjectives, verbs and nouns. Eliza is now using similes in her writing. Keep up the great effort – you are a writing Star!
